Wednesday, February 6, 2013

Poetry Selection (The Tale of Tinuviel)

The Tale of Tinuviel
J.R.R. Tolkien

The leaves were long, the grass was green,
The hemlock-umbels tall and fair,
And in the glade a light was seen
Of stars in shadow shimmering.
Tinuviel was dancing there
To music of a pipe unseen,
And light of stars was in her hair,
And in her raiment glimmering.

There Beren came from mountains cold,
And lost he wandered under leaves,
And where the Elven-river rolled
He walked alone and sorrowing.
He peered between the hemlock-leaves
And saw in wonder flowers of gold
Upon her mantle and her sleeves,
And her hair like shadow following.

Enchantment healed his weary feet
That over hills were doomed to roam;
And forth he hastened, strong and fleet,
And grasped at moonbeams glistening.
Through woven woods in Elvenhome
She lightly fled on dancing feet,
And left him lonely still to roam
In the silent forest listening.

He heard there oft the flying sound
Of feet as light as linden-leaves,
Or music welling underground,
In hidden hollows quavering.
Now withered lay the hemlock-sheaves,
And one by one with sighing sound
Whispering fell the beechen leaves
In the wintry woodland wavering.

He sought her ever, wandering far
Where leaves of years were thickly strewn,
By light of moon and ray of star
In frosty heavens shivering.
Her mantle glinted in the moon,
As on a hill-top high and far
She danced, and at her feet was strewn
A mist of silver quivering.

When winter passed, she came again,
And her song released the sudden spring,
Like rising lark, and falling rain,
And melting water bubbling.
He saw the elven-flowers spring
About her feet, and healed again
He longed by her to dance and sing
Upon the grass untroubling.

Again she fled, but swift he came.
Tinuviel! Tinuviel!
He called her by her elvish name;
And there she halted listening.
One moment stood she, and a spell
His voice laid on her: Beren came,
And doom fell on Tinuviel
That in his arms lay glistening.

As Beren looked into her eyes
Within the shadows of her hair,
The trembling starlight of the skies
He saw there mirrored shimmering.
Tinuviel the elven-fair,
Immortal maiden elven-wise,
About him cast her shadowy hair
And arms like silver glimmering.

Long was the way that fate them bore,
O’er stony mountains cold and grey,
Through halls of iron and darkling door,
And woods of nightshade morrowless.
The Sundering Seas between them lay,
And yet at last they met once more,
And long ago they passed away
In the forest singing sorrowless.
























4 comments:

  1. After reading and discussing The Tale of Tinuviel, I see the verbs and structure you were referring to. The best thing about this poem, is the fantasy world Tolkien has created. The fact that an "Elven-river" can be related to beauty, and purity, due to Tolkien's characterization of Elves, is amazing. As you touched on in your presentation, Tolkien's characters have developed in a way of making certain terms universal.

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  2. Jared Justice
    Yes, based on your presentation I can clearly see the correlation between Tolkien's personal relationship and Beren who "walked alone and sorrowing" before the intervention of Tinuviel, who is indicative of purity, as evidenced by "her song (that) released the sudden spring." Of course, with spring as a symbol of new beginnings and a world of hope, epitomized by love, Beren can finally differentiate himself from his background in the disheartening winters as a lone wanderer. Beren is fufilled

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  3. I believe that the use of nature as a main motif throughout the poem does a simultaneous good job of painting the feeling for the poem, the actual imagery of nature. While the states of nature reflect the actions of the characters within the poem, being able to describe the world in this way creates the folklore type of feel, especially through the various archetypes of terrain that form a grand earth, which is the context for the happenings within the poem.

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  4. I thought it was very interesting how you included the poems “Bilbo’s Walking Song” and “The Tale of Tinuviel” from “The Lord of the Rings” as your poem selections. They provide a lot of foreshadowing and insight on the characters and their current position during their journey. This can be seen through the contrast between the line: “And light of stars was in her hair, /And in her raiment glimmering.” and “long was the way that fate them bore, O’er stony mountains cold and grey, /Through halls of iron and darkling door, / And woods of nightshade morrowless.” in which it can be seen the trying journey they must encounter. While I do like this, I think it also might have been better to choose one that went along better with your thesis statement, since you focused so much on racism. While it does have some description of the difference between dark and light, seen in “nightshade” and “light of stars”, I didn’t think it was as supportive as a different poem might have been. One that centered around the idea of racism, or the denouncing of it, would have made your argument more concise.

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